Sunday, January 29, 2017

Description of a Boy

His biggest wish if for a writer to write about him.
To write about how his eyes light up when he smiles or the way his laugh is low but only comes around when he truly thinks something is funny.
He might be shy and awkward but that's what makes you wonder if you're not good enough.
This is what makes you so much more intrigued.
He doesn't let you in because he's been hurt too many times.
All he is looking for in life is happiness.
He wants joy and light, love and someone to care for him the way he cares for each individual he knows.
He only has one flaw.
He picks away at himself till he can't find any light in the dark but his strength and persistence push him forward.
There is a part of him that knows he will be okay despite what the world or his mind have told him.
This is his triumph.
This is the thing that makes him seem so tall, despite his actual height.
Not only are his emotional qualities amazing but the perks of his physical appearance only heighten the appeal.
His eyes are his best feature.
He thinks they're just brown like every other pair of brown eyes but what he misses is what everyone else sees.
They see the crinkles in the corners of his eyes when he smiles or how in the sun its as if they turn into pools of endless Carmel swirling around and constantly changing hues when the light shirts.
Or how his hands are so strong they feel like they could hold the entire universe in them and not waver.
However, when he touches you it's like you've never felt anything softer.
He's gentle and careful as to make sure he doesn't make any wrong moves.
With every touch he makes he's searching your eyes to make sure you're okay.
When he holds you it feels as if nothing could hurt you.
His arms create a strong barrier and you feel safe and calm.
His hair is so soft as you run your fingers through it, until he thinks you're ruining its perfect look.

A writer could go on and on about him with their words but they could never amount to emotions that are felt when they are truly uncovering the real him.

-Excerpt of they way I actually feel

1 comment:

  1. Good pathos.

    Note: I think in the first line you mean "is" instead of "if"